Delete this

[Oman]

HH, the problem is the way it's presented. Anyway, I agree with Jdodge, the first thing that jumped out was how proud you were of the video quality. To which I, certainly no techhead, would say "Ummm...cool?" Bad quality video doesn't really make or break an LP. DemonHybrid is also right about the commentary being what makes it. Games aren't really made to be watched, with no input from the gamer (except Final Fantasy's 40hrs lost watching my character auto-play) so the interaction comes from the commentary. You need to make the viewer feel like you're talking

to

them more rather than about something and they're just listening.

The first four minutes was boring. I (and almost everyone else) has played Super Mario 64. It was re-released on DS so now my mum has played it. You added nothing to the experience. That is my criticism: unentertaining. "I'm not good at jokes" was never going to be a good start.

[Oman]

I'm sorry I asked for feedback. Mods, if you see this, please delete this thread. I knew I didn't like mafiascum that much anyway. People here aren't, in all honesty, that helpful. Thanks to those who actually gave constructive criticism and

were

actually trying to help.

HAHAHA! Don't get the answer you want? Cry and take your ball home!

The answers you want are elsewhere. Your inability to take criticism is hilarious, especially with the "I knew I didn't like you guys, I just wanted your approval".

[Oman]

I don't understand why my post wasn't criticism? Just sayin'.

[Oman]

I love Prozac so much. Look at him helpfully knock him back in his place. Can we go back to people thinking we're alts?

[Oman]

Dammit Oman what happened to resolution Smile?

Resolution Smile is still in effect. Chaz did it with a nice smiley attitude and I was smiling at it. The other one was laughing at his tanty.